I bet you've seen lotsa tuts. I didn't know how to make tweens in my first animation. Yeah, you have to speed up the framerate, and use more movieclips (make the water move, wind through the trees). But it's very good for your first video.
I like it. The idea is not really original and the whole movie could've been a bit shorter, but it's got something, like Dr. Seuss's books got something. Basically I would focus more on the background (remove lines, add trees and grass) and get yourself some clouds. Also, put the framerate a bit higher, and get more camera viewpoints.
What about just "Read it" ?
It's just a 2D ripp-off from Metal Gear Solid. The controls suck. But the friendly fire is cool.
It's not a fantastic game, and the buttons suck. Try putting a white square with Alpha 0% underneath the text.
It's far too short, and why an intro?
And the english sucks. Use a translator.
Sorry, but you should upload a bigger version.
Yes... is the first chapter...
For example, the first chapter of Final Fantasy Sonic X 5 aren´t good too, but the six chapter is excellent...
The second chapter is more long!
GAME is good, GRAPHICS are bad.
Well, the GAME is pretty worth playing, but the GRAPHICS are a bit low...
The tank is riding a bit bumpy, and the loop looks not like a loop.
Also, make other buttons for play/pause.
I think it's a cool game, but:
Please upload a new version!
Your landscapes are all truly beautiful... Bad thing it's so tiny.
The wave is looking so natural! This should be an iPod advert. BTW; could you "scout" my drawings?
I'm sorry, but you're not supposed to ask to be scouted. I know I didn't.
I will take a look at your art, but I'm not going to promise anything.
Oh, and thank you for the compliment. :)
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