I bet you've seen lotsa tuts. I didn't know how to make tweens in my first animation. Yeah, you have to speed up the framerate, and use more movieclips (make the water move, wind through the trees). But it's very good for your first video.
I like it. The idea is not really original and the whole movie could've been a bit shorter, but it's got something, like Dr. Seuss's books got something. Basically I would focus more on the background (remove lines, add trees and grass) and get yourself some clouds. Also, put the framerate a bit higher, and get more camera viewpoints.
What about just "Read it" ?
You've got some potential, but this video is far too long and boring. It also needs substitles.
LAWL 11/10! :D
This is such an awesome movie! But, there two things:
It looks a bit odd when he turns his head up.
His hair colour isn't black.
But for the rest: Pure awesome! Make more!
...with the guy below me. It's not 'E' for 'Everyone'.
This is the 4th time I watched this...
This is a REVIEW! I'm serious! This place is for REVIEWS, not for comments like: "l0lz very funneh!!1 6/5!"
+ Walk cycles
+ Everything starts the next day
- Music stops at the wrong moment
- Lines differ from thickness
Don't really need this...
But i love your stick figures! It's a pleasure to watch them!
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